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    This is the last pic before I have to stop and wait for nominees (it won't be too late after that, it'll just help):
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    I also reviewed the dialogue in 'Meet Cuddles.'
    Puffin: You're special because you tell stories.
    Cuddles: Yeah, but whatever.
    ...I feel full of myself right now.
    @Puffin: I hope you like your role.
    Last edited by ChesCa; May 19th, 2010 at 10:40 PM. Reason: I really did try and not Gary Stu it...

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    Just an update for you guys: I finished the next twelve pages, and I only need to color and add dialogue. Hopefully, these next pages will succeed in establishing the actual mood of the series.
    A hint of things to come:
    A ceremony
    Ivotas
    A spit-take (my apologies in advance to Robby, Brennen and Urouge)
    The real reason why the four heroes were recruited.
    And naturally, the dawn of a disaster.

  3. #43

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    Okay, here's the next installment:
    Part VI: Uh-oh
    ...I told you that I wanted to change the tone of the story to what I wanted.
    Good news: I succeeded.
    Bad news: I succeeded.
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    This thread is now accepting hate mail.

    Two things:
    1. I'm not sure if that deal between Ivotas and Greg/Dude is really solid, so I'm going to see if I can find any kinks to work out.
    2. I don't think I'm violating any rules, but if these 12 pics take up too much memory or something, let me know and I can break up this part into separate posts.

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    No too bad not too bad. I did find the "Champions under false pretense" twist to be particularly well done. Keep up the good work Cuddles!

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    I love how this is going! Just a question though: Why am I orange?



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    Liking the comic, I'm honored by my appearance and like the diverse range of forum members, keep up the good work.




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    Thanks guys!
    @Chrissie: You're orange because you're the orange princess (in the game, there were four color-coded princesses).
    @Zyordius: You are going to love what your character can do.
    A question: how do I post individual posts on the first page (like Snocone's comic)?
    Also, as a little side note, you guys wouldn't believe how much trouble Robo's 'grandkids' line was giving me. I had to go through a lot of other lines first to let Taboo's silence be funny without making it look to obvious.
    The next installment will be the battle, the princesses getting kidnapped, and the battering ram before the first fight.
    And if you guys are in the dark about any part of the game, I'll post a vid showing what's being parodied.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chrissie View Post
    I love how this is going! Just a question though: Why am I orange?
    I can't stop staring at your avatar! D8

    Oh, wait, I'm supposed to be talking about Cuddles' comic. Hate mail you say?

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    You're so awesome puffin. Thank God you just barely joined in 2009.


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    Woah, I didn't realize I had been portrayed again, recently! I really need to get with the system, haha. I've got to get reading through this, so I can complement it without making shit up!

    Edit: Fun stuff. I'm intrigued by the direction and my ego is tickled by my own appearance. of course. My main complain is that the dialogue can get pretty hard to read at certain points. Have you tried working speech bubbles in? The space is a bit tight as it is, but legible dialogue does wonders.

    I look forward to the future of this new serialization!
    Last edited by Wagomu; May 21st, 2010 at 03:20 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cuddles the Dark View Post
    Thanks guys!
    @Chrissie: You're orange because you're the orange princess (in the game, there were four color-coded princesses).
    Oooooh~! I see!! O:

    Quote Originally Posted by puffin View Post
    I can't stop staring at your avatar! D8

    Oh, wait, I'm supposed to be talking about Cuddles' comic. Hate mail you say?
    [YOUTUBE]<object width="480" height="385"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/IUjqjEap3lE&hl=en_GB&fs=1&"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/IUjqjEap3lE&hl=en_GB&fs=1&" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="480" height="385"></embed></object>[/YOUTUBE]



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    Finally I got where Insider's avatar is from. It's THAT hot!





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    Hey guys, just so that you know that I'm not slacking off, I'm giving a preview of a few pages (no dialogue, no color).
    While this is supposed to be a gag comic, well...
    Just as fair warning, the bulk of 'guest appearances' will be in the beginning, as that is the best opportunity to get as many people in as possible. After that, Castle Crashers goes from a Barbarian War to four warriors meeting various characters along the way. Basically, if you find that characters suddenly disappear, it's because the majority of the comic takes place outside of the AP Kingdom, and thus away from civilization in this case.
    Even so, the comic won't solely be about Shuhan/Robo/Snocone/Cuddles, just their travels. You will get to see old and new faces along the way.
    Actually, we barely play a part in the invasion. Our 'heroic debut' won't be until the barbarian war proper.
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    Two more things (I'm starting to sound like uncle):
    1. Since tinypic pics don't always load, I'm going to number the pages, then tell you how many there are (the page number will be reset each time). This way, you'll know if you're missing a page and refresh (there's 5 pages here).
    2. I'm also going to give you guys previews of what happens next with youtube vids.
    This next parts a LOT bigger than I thought it would be (it's going to be a while), but here's what you can expect:
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    [youtube]o5jVqcl9ClA[/youtube]
    Fun Fact: Juju is somewhere in this vid, if you know what I mean.
    EDIT: *looks at the Princess Fight in the video*
    ...THAT WILL NOT BE HAPPENING!! Besides, Taboo is made out of clay in this story, and that doesn't exactly leave a good feeling a on the lips. *bleh*
    [youtube]znpt-EbeSdQ[/youtube]
    [youtube]3nK8l2p1AYg[/youtube]
    Last edited by ChesCa; May 24th, 2010 at 02:59 AM.

  13. #53

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    I just realized that I finished 20 pages (and I'm not even close to finishing the invasion), and that it would be a big hassle to color them all at once.
    I'm going to give 5 now, 10 later, then 5 more later after that.
    Since it's so few pages, they won't be numbered this time:
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    On a completely unrelated note, here's a tune I've been listening to over and over again:
    [youtube]pyeKdiMIgH8&feature=related[/youtube]
    Insomnia and Dark Jazz does funny things to people.
    Last edited by ChesCa; May 25th, 2010 at 03:40 AM. Reason: ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

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    Sorry, I've been spacing out today. Here are the next 9 pages, and I'll try to get more uploaded tomorrow, but will end where the 'suspense' is greatest.
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    Blackouts make everything so much easier to color.
    EDIT: Whoops! Forgot dialogue for page 7:
    Panel 1:Greg/Dude: Get as many pocket radios as you can find.
    Panel 2: *sheeeooom* (power going out)
    Panel 3: Greg/Dude: Did they attack the Art Thread already?
    Oceanizer: L-last I checked, they were barely at the gate.
    Last edited by ChesCa; May 26th, 2010 at 12:03 AM. Reason: Maybe I do need an editor?

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    Nice more pages!

    The story is really picking up, loving every minute of it!

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    Good work! I guess i'll go back to slacking off.

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    Glad to hear you two like it.
    These are the last of the pages (for now). 8 in total.
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    ...While not a bad thing, Cyan's coming across a lot more creepy than funny.
    Also: Me? A Kirby fan? Never...
    Last edited by ChesCa; May 27th, 2010 at 03:29 AM.

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    LOL! XD "I'm not touching you...I'm not touching you..." :'D

    PS: I better annoy the heck out of my kidnappers one way or another.



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    Not bad at all! A little more polish in the art might do wonders (fill tool and zoom in work wonders for those white spots). That Darkstrom thing on the last chapter/part gave me a good laugh, and the mirror gag is always a classic, haha. Keep up the good work!

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    Thanks for the support guys.
    @Chrissie: Yeah...I'll see what I can do, but your kidnapping scene ain't pretty (but it is funny, and that's what counts).

    It might take a bit of a while to do more pages, because I have to do scenes in the Art Thread, the Help Library, 'that thread' in the General area, the Media thread, plus Wagomu, the four guardians and Juju (you'll see). I'll try to have everything sorted out and start drawing in a week.

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